ext_355189 ([identity profile] mini-shrink.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2009-06-17 05:16 pm (UTC)

Huh? I'm confused - is AJ/Alex a part of the Emma/Emily continuity, something to do with X-men, or an inside joke between you two that I'm being far too nosy about.

Emily wondered if she was only good at getting children to confess the awful things that had happened to them.
“We take the limo.”
… or not.

Ah, best part, and lovely tie-in with Emily's initial awkwardness around kids, and I like how you're showing signs of a realistic transition from awkwardness to fondness. The toothbrush scene is adorable, and I really do want to hug both Emily and (at arm's length) Didi.

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