ext_72207 ([identity profile] g-ww.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2009-07-31 11:56 pm (UTC)

Very nicely written.

Tbh, the prompt you mentioned did not fill me with anticipation (read some similar before and they were bad) - but this was really good. I like the voices you've given the characters and I really like the way they met, and the tip-toeing they did around each other at first.

I'd definitely read chapter 2. Sara has another two whole days in Vegas, right?

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