http://kith-koby.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kith-koby.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2012-06-14 06:51 am (UTC)

Hurray! My request has been answered. Since this is obviously a good time to make such requests, I want you to finish all the other unfinished fics!

Seriously though, this was an excellent conclusion. I's nice to see Emma getting some control of herself and being productive. The idea of being able to predict her explosions is awesome, and of course Jubilee would have lots of experience in that.

The part about breaking kids was excellent. Everybody knows that's why Emma really became a teacher - it gave her the ability to brainwash the next generation to do as she tells them without actually having to use telepathy, and she actually gets paid for it.

The ending was good. JJ and Garcia to the rescue was quite amusing. At least the meaning of the name is a lot more optimistic than Deirdre, even if Emma is concentrating on the rather negative aspects of the legend. And now the hard part starts. Crying babies, sleepless nights, beast feeding, and so on. Didi being a big sister. No doubt it'll be a hilarious mess. Well, I'll cross my fingers in the hope of seeing it sometime. Can't wait for more!

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