ext_354034 ([identity profile] artapdrkstr.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2009-08-14 04:50 am (UTC)

This chapter was fantastic! I wouldve loved to see Emmas POV on this. I like the way you transitioned Emily from being the one everyone picked on to being a social outcast and just isolated.
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