Heh, I've noticed a lot of your fanfics are like that - they don't really end happily, or at all. It's a welcome change, seeing a character being as epically bad at relationships as your interpretation of Emma Frost. However, I'd also find it quite interesting to see her working her life out to some degree.

Right now, the fanfic doesn't actually seem hopeless - they still actually seem to genuinely like each other.

Anyways, if I cannot look forward to a sequel, good or bad (my dreams are crushed) I will look forward to the rewrite. Great work, regardless.