ext_355189 ([identity profile] mini-shrink.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2010-01-25 09:23 pm (UTC)

Oh, fuck French. I'm told to write an essay on how hobbies in France vary regionally - I can't do that in any language, angry pregnant French woman or not. (You're studying linguistics, right? Why are almost all my language teachers knocked up so frequently?)

As for plot, well. I don't even know how Emily meets Emma - I imagine she's probably connected to Lady Adler in some way, but not close enough to be the one taking care of her, or with some reason for Lady Adler to need a companion. As for plot, well, just Emily's journey as she grows up can be enough if you write it well enough (which you will). I think a main thread could be her education, and Lady Adler grooming her into an .

Which does not exclude inheritance ruses or forced marriages, but maybe you shouldn't give it too heavy a Dickens feel, just because you have shit happen to Emily in most of your stories and it might be interesting for some variety. After all, the situation's bad enough what with being orphaned and feeling isolated - no need for gratuitous angst. I think the inheritance ruse would fit in - especially in the Prentiss circle - but I just think that you could make this fantastically intriguing without raining misery down on the poor girl.

Saying that, there’s always the challenge of a good ol’ Jack the Ripper backdrop. What’s your timeline for this story again?

Also: which town in Rajasthan did they live in? I'm guessing Jaipur, based on Mr. Prentiss' occupation. Anyway, moving onto Maths homework instead.

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