It's always really wonderful to have someone tell you that all the things that you are incredibly worried about are actually admirably accurate characterization elements. So thank you.

I do believe Emma is set to appear in the next chapter, I'm really not going to drag this out, however I can only say that the next part will be up as soon as I write it. I do hope its soon, because I think that I'm just as excited to find out how my bare sketch of a plot will bend and develop as it continues as anyone else!

Thank you for your awesome comments!