You are getting sooo good at this! I like the side comments that Emily makes to Emma while they're warming each other up.

In response to you apologies, (again with the apologies *shakes head* :) you update faster than some other authors I follow so don't beat yourself up. The fact that you spend any time writing this while busy at school or enjoying spring break is amazing enough to me (although I do spend time reading it while in school, so I guess that if you love it, it's not much different and you definitely love writing). I want to read your other original fiction (everything you write is original to me, just cause the characters were created before you doesn't mean that you aren't the one responsible for these great deep characters that I believe go way beyond the comic or show) so I hope one day you either share that too or at least get published and let us know where to get the book.
Nuff said, thanks for the enjoyable read.