well this was a fun way to start my weekend. loved the physical details regarding mermaid even if a bit hard to understand. cool idea about the cave systems and sunken ship stuff though.

i think its decent for a crackfic. in fact its a nice change from the epics i have been reading lately that take several hours.

on a related but different note after seeing the typing below about sergals I had to investigate. I found this on deviantart

http://siekfried.deviantart.com/art/Sergal-fanart-color-99182973

perhaps emma might look like this if a sergal?

you rock. thanks for the story.