Oh, Emily... someone hug her. Though JJ is being pretty nice, or at least as nice as she can be. Have to say, you have a very dark image of Emily. I mean, I'm with you in thinking that she's pretty angsty, but I have to ask: what is it in particular about the way the writers write Emily that makes her seem this damaged? Just curious to know.

And Emma sounds like an interesting (and, of course, scary as shit) teacher. There's nothing I need to know about Jean and Scott other than what you're writing, right?

Also, I don't think you'll finish this in 4 parts. In fact, I hope you don't. Can't wait for the next chapter!