ext_355176 ([identity profile] nike-ravus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2009-06-20 11:28 pm (UTC)

Re: d

A real review! Thank you!

Not offended at all about Jordan. I'm really flying blind with a lot of this, and while a lot of the CM characters have sort of a single term that guides their character (Hotch: frowny, Morgan: enthused) I haven't worked out what that is for Jordan yet.

I'll try to go back in and fix it. But do you have any clue what she might do when faced with the uncanny existence of Emily's baby?

I wasn't going to put her in, but I like her, and I wanted to suggest various ways the team might have changed after three years. That's also about JJ becoming a profiler. In my head (which is a strange place) the team has become generally more respected and the practice of profiling less esoteric and doubtful. (Since it really isn't that weird), and theoretically they need both a press liaison and a police liaison. So JJ basically keeps her job, but gets a raise, and actually is supposed to be waving that gun around as often as she does. Indeed, buying a house and having a baby are not cheap activities. (this is why i need a beta reader! tragedy!)

Jack Hotchner! Do you have any clue how old he is? (he seems to be suffering from SORAS) I have something developing here, but it may take some setting up.

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