Don't be sorry! Thank you! I think a lot of the problems will work themselves out as i fill in the three years of backstory. I probably shouldn't have started writing this until I figured out what happened in the interim.
But Criminal Minds is what I need help with. If there's something I don't know about X-Men there's usually five wikipedia articles on it and enough flexibility in timeline and characterization that I can pretty much do what I want, but I really have not seen enough CM to have confidence writing it. (How did I get into this? Jeez!)
However, the more I watch, the more it becomes incredibly obvious that the *entire team* has a crush on Emily. Jordan's is just more obvious than most. (Especially in the club scenes)
Jordan's definitely a flitter. I think she's just come back recently, so missed most of the drama. And the JJ bracket could be an entire five pages if i do it right. I will add it to my notes for the Balesco bit (which i have about 4 paragraphs of).
I love your idea about Garcia and Emma being stuck babysitting, or just Garcia and Emma in the same room. Gah. May need to work on this.
(And thank you for commenting on the sex! I'm so bad at writing sex, or even implied sex. But yes, 3 occupants will be hugely creepy in the morning)
Re: Jordan
I think a lot of the problems will work themselves out as i fill in the three years of backstory. I probably shouldn't have started writing this until I figured out what happened in the interim.
But Criminal Minds is what I need help with. If there's something I don't know about X-Men there's usually five wikipedia articles on it and enough flexibility in timeline and characterization that I can pretty much do what I want, but I really have not seen enough CM to have confidence writing it. (How did I get into this? Jeez!)
However, the more I watch, the more it becomes incredibly obvious that the *entire team* has a crush on Emily. Jordan's is just more obvious than most. (Especially in the club scenes)
Jordan's definitely a flitter. I think she's just come back recently, so missed most of the drama. And the JJ bracket could be an entire five pages if i do it right. I will add it to my notes for the Balesco bit (which i have about 4 paragraphs of).
I love your idea about Garcia and Emma being stuck babysitting, or just Garcia and Emma in the same room. Gah. May need to work on this.
(And thank you for commenting on the sex! I'm so bad at writing sex, or even implied sex. But yes, 3 occupants will be hugely creepy in the morning)