http://atrumnoxnoctis.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] atrumnoxnoctis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2011-08-16 08:35 am (UTC)

Gah! I'm so sorry that I haven't been more on point about commenting! This summer's been really busy for me, especially now that my first term as chapter president is set to begin less than two weeks! Had a lot of preparations to take care of before then, but it was all worth it, and now I can take the time to review one of my favorite authors!

Have I told you how brilliant you are? I was wondering how you were going to work Emily's past into your fics, but you certainly proved that you were able to do so seamlessly!

I loved how vulnerable you made Emma in this! We don't get to see if often enough, but despite that cold, aloof persona she has, she can be human, too. We don't get to see that side of her that much in comics either, but here, I felt that it would be very much in character with what she would do if faced with a fatal situation.

So, there were some facts that were going to be revealed in the next season of "Criminal Minds", according to some people on the show. *spoilers* Emily's supposed to be coming back, but since most of the team believes she's dead, there's going to be some hurt and resentment floating around among other things when she finally makes her appearance. *end spoilers* I don't suppose you'll be integrating that in a future fic, would you? Anything from you is always expected to be fantastic though!

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