ext_41928 ([identity profile] heart1e55m00mba.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nike_ravus 2009-12-19 02:00 am (UTC)

I don't think it came across as disjointed. Having JJ be in uber soccer mom mode was a little strange, but I got used to it. The ending was fantastic.
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