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Title: Succubus
Author: Alsike
Fandom: GL
Rating: PG-13
Summary:

When Frank finally notices that his wife doesn’t love him, his heart doesn’t break, but his mind does. Natalia was supposed to be the good woman. She was the one who never lied, who smiled when ever he made her happy, who was the perfect wife and mother: doting, pious, and a good, honest cook, even though she wasn’t a Cooper.

But Rafe was still in prison. And he had been there on the day Emma had taken her old bus home and waited for Natalia on the porch. He had seen the shock on her face, her body freeze, and the way she glanced up, hope in her eyes, to the empty space behind Emma, as if she expected someone who wasn’t there.

The Sunday after the wedding, Natalia came home from church early. She looked more worn than before, not happy or elated like he had expected her to. The next weekend he offered to go with her. But she shook her head, saying she wasn’t going this week. She hadn’t been back since. There was a rumor going around town that Natalia had had a fight with god.

When Olivia’s generous honeymoon leave came to an end, and Natalia was preparing to return to work, he had asked her why. She didn’t have to work now. He was the provider. If she wanted to feel useful she could help out at Company. Natalia just looked confused and almost afraid. “You don’t have to work,” he repeated. She just shook her head, and shook it, and shook it, like trying to rid herself of a particularly pesky fly. “I have to go to work,” was all she said, and she disappeared.

Natalia was tired every night after work. She said she didn’t feel like cooking, so they ate at Company often. But he liked those nights, because she was always a little happier, a little more animated as she told stories of what had happened that day, what funny things Olivia had done, how shocked she had been when Olivia had dropped another, more difficult project on her desk and expected her to handle it with only the barest of input. At first Frank hadn’t understood. “She’s working you too hard,” he said. Because it was Olivia, and she used people. But Natalia had blinked and then smiled shyly. “Olivia,” she said, and it was in a tone of voice that Frank had never heard before, “Olivia believes that I can do anything. It makes me… it makes me so happy to know that she has faith in me. And when I complete her proposals, because she never lets me fail, I have more faith in myself.”

Frank liked to believe that he was a forgiving person, but there were some things you don’t forget. Shelling out for flowers, champagne and romance for a woman who sleeps with your father is one of those things. He was angry with her for leading his father on, too, of course, but that was just one of the hundred despicable things Olivia had done. When it’s personal, you don’t forget it.

So when he had gone out looking for Natalia one afternoon, hoping to surprise her with a picnic and champagne, and he had found her in the park, leaning on the railing overlooking the ducks, and gazing at Olivia Spencer, who was talking with her hands and being silly, making up voices for the ducks, with a look in her eyes that Frank could only call love, he had a right to believe that the world had shattered in two.

Olivia didn’t matter. He knew her for the succubus she was. But Natalia, the perfect woman, he realized had been lying to him from the very start.

“How long?” He asked her, his fingers sinking deep into the flesh of her arms, “How long have you been… been fucking her?”

There was a flash of guilt before the fear and denials. And when his fist made contact with her eye he felt only the glory of righteousness.

When Natalia walked into the office that day, Olivia knew. She knew the marks, knew the wide-eyed look of disbelief, and she knew that if she had her gun right now, Frank wouldn’t live to see another morning. But she had been preparing for this day since before the wedding. She had warned Frank, that if he hurt her, he would pay the price. She dialed the phone. “Start it,” she said quietly, “The Cooper protocol.”

She reached out and gathered Natalia in her arms and let her cry.

The divorce hearing had been angry and acrimonious. Frank knew whom it was who had finally tipped off IAB to all his little maneuverings and kickbacks for the people he thought needed a favor. He screamed at them, Natalia covering her black eye and her tears, and Olivia, standing like a bodyguard, like a knight, glaring daggers of ice at him. He told the entire audience that he knew they were fucking like rabbits, like whores, that he had seen them on Olivia’s desk, Natalia’s legs hooked around her waist, Olivia leaning over her, pushing, thrusting into her.

Olivia sued him for slander.

She won.

Frank left town. But he found Natalia before he went, caught her the moment she was alone. He asked her, “was this what you wanted?” And she looked at him, unbroken, her eyes harder, fierier, more alive than he had seen them since the day she had accepted his engagement. And he realized that she had never looked at him like that before, never looked at him with anything but condescending boredom, and he thought he understood what it felt like to be Phillip, maybe even to be Olivia. If they can’t look at you like that because they love you, make them look at you that way because they hate you.

“I don’t believe in vengeance,” she said. And Frank smiled, because that was a lie. .
Fin

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i really really really liked this. secretly, this is almost what i want to happen. because it's awesome.
wonderful job.

This was well done. Thank you for sharing. More Please

*thud*

Damn dude. Intense and so freaking awesome. Although I would never want Natalia to go through this, it was a great ride. Thanks.

You'll have to excuse me for just a moment. I need to go kill Frank now.

...

::brushes hands on jeans::

Well, now that that's done, thank you for this. It's dark but viscerally satisfying to have Olivia utterly destroy this man's career/livelihood. It is also very satisfying to have Natalia look at him like a bug.

it is! I hate how everyone's like "Oh, Frank's a good guy," when he's almost passive-aggressive in his obtuseness. When he told Olivia to stop trying to be a good person, because she could never do it, was when he cemented his character to me.

When he told Olivia to stop trying to be a good person, because she could never do it, was when he cemented his character to me.

I must have missed this. ::drums fingers on keyboard:: ::considers killing him off in my story::

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dW1SbZMSXNs&feature=related
It's about 7.5 minutes in. I hate him more every time I watch it. Natalia's just blown him off and he takes it out on Liv.
(Frank in your story is perfect, but I doubt i'll shed a tear for him if you do decide on death)

Oh yeah... He's going DOWN. Maybe not in HBM (unfortunately, I need him there for reasons that totally escape me now) but definitely in something Tanked Muse will be happy to cook up for him.

Why is Olivia throwing Natalia at this man after THAT??

Ugh.

In other news, I am very interested to find that I there is a part of me that would willingly kill for Olivia Spencer, the fictional character. LOL Wow, did she get under my skin and how!

Oh, wait. Wait, wait, wait. Redemption. Hurt/Comfort. Mommy. Never mind. She is COMPLETELY my fictional type. I get it now. LOL

Olivia does have a certain something, doesn't she? But her wimpy reticence has been getting on my nerves! What happened to the Olivia that hired a hitman to kill her own daughter?

... that might not have been her best moment, come to think of it.

(I love how i think i can talk intelligently about this show when i only heard about it a month ago. And i've been through about 4 waves of liking it or despising it utterly in said month.)

Everyone talks about how Olivia needs redemption, but it's always seemed to me that she's the type of person who does the absolute wrong thing in the most abrasive, drastic way, for completely honest, noble reasons. ...I like people who have no sense of proportion.

You and I are in the same boat apparently. I heard about all this Otalia stuff in January. LOL And yeah, I'm glad I didn't know she'd hired a hitman to kill Ava until now. LOL

I believe I will reconsider the redemption thing based on what you said. I believe you. She is (usually) completely honest in her life. This trend of self-sacrifice and "nobility" (I loathe when lesbians are described as "noble" for bowing out of their loves' lives to make way for the "normal" man, don't you?) in the face of Natalia's "happiness" is so unnatural. It's bothering the hell out of me too.

I am completely unable to bear the thought of what the writers might do to her next week. I'll be glad to see Natalia do whatever she does because anything is better than the Stepford Wife nothing we've been getting. However, Olivia needs to be Olivia again and soon.

Thank God for the AU Otalia that lives in my head and in the heads of other authors (such as yourself). :)

wow i loved this story. i love this pair

I love this! Really really quite a lot. Awesome job.

Damn. Now I seriously want to see Frank gone. Not necessarily dead.. just out of town. Or in prison for being a complete fucker. Yeah, I don't like Frank. lol

Wonderful story and amazingly written. :)

Holy cow. Dark,disturbing and just brilliant. I loved it. Apparently there's a lot of backstory I'm missing, thank goodness.

This was so well written and gave dimesions to the character that were awesome.

" if she had her gun right now, Frank wouldn’t live to see another morning." Snap. That's an Olivia that I really want to see.

“Olivia,” she said, and it was in a tone of voice that Frank had never heard before, “Olivia believes that I can do anything. It makes me… it makes me so happy to know that she has faith in me. And when I complete her proposals, because she never lets me fail, I have more faith in myself.” - Great line

And when his fist made contact with her eye he felt only the glory of righteousness. - Whoa! Holy crap.

Love Protective!Olivia

If they can’t look at you like that because they love you, make them look at you that way because they hate you. - Another great line

Daaaaaaamn. That was really good. Is it wrong that I love "Frank goes nuts" fics so much? I have to say though that the little scene he sees with Olivia making up voices for the ducks made me grin. Hmmm, I kinda wish she shot Frank. Or someone shoot Frank. Then again, he may not notice >.>

Wonderful fic!

This was so, so good. After all the "Frank is a good man" junk they have been throwing our way in the past weeks/months while he is being obnoxiously passive-aggressive, I really needed to read something like this. I kind of wish Olivia would go off on him in the show as well, but since that is apparently not going to happen this did really well instead. Excellent job! :)