Can I just say that you're a life-saver? Reading new installments to your fics is the most perfect thing to look forward to after getting through my first final, which is why I held off on reading and commenting your third chapter until now.
I actually liked reading a bit more about the gender politics involved in this world. It's necessary for readers to understand what type of setting the characters are immersed in, and the audience can probably comprehend why the characters act the way they do even though said audience won't always agree with their actions. A different world equals different sets of rule though, and I think you carry off that point rather well.
So... Wayward Tori goes to the party against Jade's advice. Lol. I wonder how the latter will feel about that once she finds out. XD I'm sure it'll be all over school come the following Monday. Tori basically revealed her Alpha status the moment she stepped in to help those two betas (even though I'm still not entirely certain who they are, but I think I could just be a bit slow on the uptake, thanks to all the studying I did over the weekend. Bleh. And I still have one more final to look forward to.).
Doug seemed rather impressed with her feat though, or it could just be that he's holding off on doing anything against her while he roughs up his Alpha buddies for being so easily taken down by a female Alpha (but that's just me being my overly-pessimistic self though). I kinda want Doug to be okay with Tori's status as a means for the other male Alphas to back off on harassing her once word gets out about her, but I have a feeling that won't be as easy as it seems.
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to see Jade again or how she'll react to Cat having kissed Tori.
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I actually liked reading a bit more about the gender politics involved in this world. It's necessary for readers to understand what type of setting the characters are immersed in, and the audience can probably comprehend why the characters act the way they do even though said audience won't always agree with their actions. A different world equals different sets of rule though, and I think you carry off that point rather well.
So... Wayward Tori goes to the party against Jade's advice. Lol. I wonder how the latter will feel about that once she finds out. XD I'm sure it'll be all over school come the following Monday. Tori basically revealed her Alpha status the moment she stepped in to help those two betas (even though I'm still not entirely certain who they are, but I think I could just be a bit slow on the uptake, thanks to all the studying I did over the weekend. Bleh. And I still have one more final to look forward to.).
Doug seemed rather impressed with her feat though, or it could just be that he's holding off on doing anything against her while he roughs up his Alpha buddies for being so easily taken down by a female Alpha (but that's just me being my overly-pessimistic self though). I kinda want Doug to be okay with Tori's status as a means for the other male Alphas to back off on harassing her once word gets out about her, but I have a feeling that won't be as easy as it seems.
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to see Jade again or how she'll react to Cat having kissed Tori.