Yes! I can't wait! (And I was hoping it might take a dive into Emma's world; would love to see what you do with the Hellfire Club...)
And no, it's not too much; the myriad points of view are both refreshing and true to the procedural-style 'Criminal Minds' bent of this arc. You opened up the world, gave it dimension and depth, without losing your primary focus (the Emma/Emily dynamic). The Logan-Emma interactions are fantastic; he's the perfect character to ground her/act as an emotional touchstone without actually becoming involved or threatening her need for privacy. Also: Garcia-as-mutant is made of pure win (that, by the way, is a subtle petition for more Garcia), and you even made me like Jean! (Not a feat to be scoffed at.)
Anyhow, I know what it's like to send things out into the void and hope they ring true; as long as you're writing, I'll be here on the other end.
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Date: 2009-05-17 11:52 pm (UTC)And no, it's not too much; the myriad points of view are both refreshing and true to the procedural-style 'Criminal Minds' bent of this arc. You opened up the world, gave it dimension and depth, without losing your primary focus (the Emma/Emily dynamic). The Logan-Emma interactions are fantastic; he's the perfect character to ground her/act as an emotional touchstone without actually becoming involved or threatening her need for privacy. Also: Garcia-as-mutant is made of pure win (that, by the way, is a subtle petition for more Garcia), and you even made me like Jean! (Not a feat to be scoffed at.)
Anyhow, I know what it's like to send things out into the void and hope they ring true; as long as you're writing, I'll be here on the other end.