I'm glad you showed Tori's family's reactions to the fight. I love Tori's dad being so proud.
Tori finally realizes that Jade is an omega and they kiss -- yay! It really was a beautifully written scene.
I do have some questions.
Based on the first paragraph of the Wikipedia entry, Tori and Jade have mated, correct?
I'm still confused when mating happens. For example, in the cafeteria scene you mention "top alphas [...] a couple with clingy omega girlfriends" -- are those alphas mated to their omega girlfriends? Anytime an alpha fucks an omega does this mate them? (The part about synthesized chemicals to induce a mating heat confused me.)
Question about this paragraph: "Jade stormed out of the closet. What the hell did she have to do? She would have given it up in the god damned janitor's closet like some kind of whore." Are you saying Jade wanted Tori to fuck her here? And she's angry that Tori didn't?
I'm very worried about Jade -- that she'll go home and her father will be able to tell that she's mated and beat Jade into an inch of her life. Hopefully, the worst he'll do is kick Jade out of the house and she'll have to move in with Cat.
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Date: 2012-12-14 05:20 pm (UTC)Tori finally realizes that Jade is an omega and they kiss -- yay! It really was a beautifully written scene.
I do have some questions.
Based on the first paragraph of the Wikipedia entry, Tori and Jade have mated, correct?
I'm still confused when mating happens. For example, in the cafeteria scene you mention "top alphas [...] a couple with clingy omega girlfriends" -- are those alphas mated to their omega girlfriends? Anytime an alpha fucks an omega does this mate them? (The part about synthesized chemicals to induce a mating heat confused me.)
Question about this paragraph: "Jade stormed out of the closet. What the hell did she have to do? She would have given it up in the god damned janitor's closet like some kind of whore." Are you saying Jade wanted Tori to fuck her here? And she's angry that Tori didn't?
I'm very worried about Jade -- that she'll go home and her father will be able to tell that she's mated and beat Jade into an inch of her life. Hopefully, the worst he'll do is kick Jade out of the house and she'll have to move in with Cat.