I gotta admit, I was a little iffy when I saw what the pairing was for this particular fic. You've made me a definite Emma/Emily fan thanks to your writing, so seeing our favorite telepath with anyone else seems almost blasphemous. Nevertheless, I gave it a try, and, to my great surprise, I actually liked it. O.o It didn't seem like the fic as a whole was forced, so the transition was very smooth despite the odd pairing which I greatly appreciated.
As for the prompt/subject matter, hey, I've been on 4chan long enough that futa really doesn't bother me. In fact, it never did. Of course, considering my love of TG sex, was that really a surprise? XP
Oh, and I love how you evolved Emma's and JJ's relationship towards the end. While they weren't sexually intimate anymore, it definitely showed that they had a better understanding of each other. Personally, having them in a tentative friendship is actually more believable than anything else, so I'm glad that you didn't force anything else out of their one 'encounter' of sorts together.
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Date: 2009-10-06 12:36 am (UTC)As for the prompt/subject matter, hey, I've been on 4chan long enough that futa really doesn't bother me. In fact, it never did. Of course, considering my love of TG sex, was that really a surprise? XP
Oh, and I love how you evolved Emma's and JJ's relationship towards the end. While they weren't sexually intimate anymore, it definitely showed that they had a better understanding of each other. Personally, having them in a tentative friendship is actually more believable than anything else, so I'm glad that you didn't force anything else out of their one 'encounter' of sorts together.
Fantastic fic all around.