Aww, now I'm feeling guilty. Not *terribly* guilty, because I do like to see our girls making out! BUT I'll let you in on secret -- as long as you're posting parts of this story, I won't really complain if they're not constantly making out. I could go read a PWP if that's all I wanted, and I'm reading this for the story and dialogue and characterization, not just pron, notwithstanding my shallow earlier comment. :)
Looking forward, in an apprehensive kind of way, to finding out what Garcia discovered that is clearly bad news. Nice cliffhanger, also.
Finally -- Jubilee is such a nice counterweight to this story -- love watching her harass 'Frosty'!
PS: Also, fyi: I'm totally fine with more than six parts. Twenty works for me. :)
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Date: 2009-06-29 01:23 am (UTC)Aww, now I'm feeling guilty. Not *terribly* guilty, because I do like to see our girls making out! BUT I'll let you in on secret -- as long as you're posting parts of this story, I won't really complain if they're not constantly making out. I could go read a PWP if that's all I wanted, and I'm reading this for the story and dialogue and characterization, not just pron, notwithstanding my shallow earlier comment. :)
Looking forward, in an apprehensive kind of way, to finding out what Garcia discovered that is clearly bad news. Nice cliffhanger, also.
Finally -- Jubilee is such a nice counterweight to this story -- love watching her harass 'Frosty'!
PS: Also, fyi: I'm totally fine with more than six parts. Twenty works for me. :)