Date: 2009-12-10 09:27 pm (UTC)
I think you're more likely to get a rewrite than a sequel. I don't actually want to know what happens next, because it's either going to be okay, and thus completely bewildering for Emma. (Until she bewilders herself into walking out, which is a distinct possibility, and depressing.) Or it's going to be really really bad, and although writing about the utter disintegration of lives and relationships is always interesting, it might be best saved for original fiction. Or it could, of course, be normal, where everything bad is expected to be the start of something worse, and everything good treated with suspicion.

Yeah, I want it to feel cut off, not literally, but that all the things that suggest this could be leading somewhere good are gone. I need to give it a rewrite to give it that nice polished punch in the stomach feeling.
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