Ooh, good advice. I was hoping most would at least intuit it and go "oh, no! Don't *do* that!"
I think it is easier to add in details when you do not have to be either respectful of your characters or your readers. That is, when one is writing porn rather than smut. And no silly emotions to muddy the waters.
I'm afraid this one is just one of my already extensive body of 'penis envy' fics. Although this one had it most literally. :D
Now it is clear I need to take a shot at strictly female/female hardcore smut. I think it's easier to objectify male...bits, but as I have now had practice in writing all sorts of sexual humiliation scenes, I may be able to pull it off. Especially when I have such a lovely 'twisted hellcat' to work with. :)
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Date: 2010-01-21 03:24 pm (UTC)I think it is easier to add in details when you do not have to be either respectful of your characters or your readers. That is, when one is writing porn rather than smut. And no silly emotions to muddy the waters.
I'm afraid this one is just one of my already extensive body of 'penis envy' fics. Although this one had it most literally. :D
Now it is clear I need to take a shot at strictly female/female hardcore smut. I think it's easier to objectify male...bits, but as I have now had practice in writing all sorts of sexual humiliation scenes, I may be able to pull it off. Especially when I have such a lovely 'twisted hellcat' to work with. :)