Well the evening has gone from bad to worse. I KNEW that note from Winston Frost was a bad sign.
Wonderful Emma-Emily interaction. Honestly, I would have read the twelve pages happily, but this works too.
I really loved Emily's thoughts and words during her encounter with the inner circle. I can clearly hear her voice in my head, honestly with a little tweeking this dialogue could have come strait from a CM script. You really captured Emily's strength, pride and grit and a little bit of Emily's own arrogance here. You also, with just a little sentence, reminded the reader that she could back everything she was saying up. Emily Prentiss is one bad ass when she puts her mind to it.
The remark about her mother was great. Frost said far less then Sebastian but the delivery just nailed it home.
Emma's past has only been explained 3 times? That's actually pretty decent for a Big Two charecter who's been around so long. Confusing, but it could be worse.
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Date: 2010-02-04 12:08 am (UTC)Wonderful Emma-Emily interaction. Honestly, I would have read the twelve pages happily, but this works too.
I really loved Emily's thoughts and words during her encounter with the inner circle. I can clearly hear her voice in my head, honestly with a little tweeking this dialogue could have come strait from a CM script. You really captured Emily's strength, pride and grit and a little bit of Emily's own arrogance here. You also, with just a little sentence, reminded the reader that she could back everything she was saying up. Emily Prentiss is one bad ass when she puts her mind to it.
The remark about her mother was great. Frost said far less then Sebastian but the delivery just nailed it home.
Emma's past has only been explained 3 times? That's actually pretty decent for a Big Two charecter who's been around so long. Confusing, but it could be worse.
Oooh Asylum. Want it now!