This was great. Vampire dildos? Can't get any freaking better than that. I particularily liked the way Rachel was recounting the story when it had already occured, instead of describing everything as it happened at the moment - it was an interesting twist to characterization. Ivy out of control is so, so hot. You need to write more of this.
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Date: 2010-04-06 12:14 am (UTC)