LOL! I couldn't help but laugh while reading through parts of this, even when those said parts couldn't really be considered, well, laughable! *snorts*
Well, I do agree with your tag of this being a crackfic, but my brows still raised reflectively (more amused than surprised really) when I read that you let some 7-year old help you develop the plot for this! Then, with me being me (and still being completely high from a massive caffeine intake past midnight), began to wonder just how much said child helped in creating it! XD I'm an awful person, I know. u.u I blame constant viewings of 4chan for my corrupted thought processes!
As I said, any rationalized thinking went straight out the window after all that caffeine (goddamn you finals and your wicked ways of keeping me awake in preparation for you! *shakes angry fist*), so I obviously had a bit of trouble imagining your mermen and mermaids at first. Since my only resource for those two creatures laid solely from my past experiences of viewing The Little Mermaid a bajillion (you heard me, a bajillion!) times as a child, I thought they were dual-colored people with the upper and lower torsos being separate, solid colors. It was only after I got through a third of your fic that I suddenly began to realize that they were a somewhat uniform color overall. I have to say that I had some beautiful skin tones being conjured up in my mind. Emily's, in particular, sounds very interesting. Good job there!
Now to the mermaid sex! Did I mention that I loved the sex? No? Well, I did! It was very hot! X3 I loved how you took inhuman behaviors of arousal, such as the flushed bellies and the curling of tails, into the scene. It just adds this whole other element to the act that just makes it that much more appealing!
Personally, I thank reading furry stories in the past for not even making me flinch at some of the things in this fic. I didn't even bat an eye once when I took note of the prehensile penises! I mean, when you've seen furry art of this fictional species of sergals, female ones especially, who have prehensile clitoral hoods (yes, you read that right), are you really gonna react when you read about "bulls" being dominated by their cocks? I mean, I'm so used to reading or seeing these crazy, and sometimes demented, things that I was almost hoping to see Emily or Emma (maybe both) with prehensile clitoral hoods (that's beginning to become a whole lotta fun to type! ^^) really going at it at some point! And I solely blame your Fake Empire fic for that thought! XP
Yay for a Christian cameo! We so rarely see him in your fics, after all. Oo~ And we have a Derek/Spencer pairing too?! ...Is it odd that I can actually see that being plausible? And cute too? << But then I weep because even in a crackfic we see two familiar characters pairing up, and yet we've had nothing of the sort for my Sage! T^T She deserves a bit of happiness, no matter how cracky, don't you think? *hint hint* *nudge nudge*
Oo~ And shame on you for distracting me from my studies with your wonderfully, tantalizing fics when finals are only a week away! ...Pfft! Who am I kidding? I enjoy your fics, whether I'm piled high with essays and projects or not! They're so addictive! I don't think I'll ever get enough of them!
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Date: 2010-05-05 05:16 am (UTC)Well, I do agree with your tag of this being a crackfic, but my brows still raised reflectively (more amused than surprised really) when I read that you let some 7-year old help you develop the plot for this! Then, with me being me (and still being completely high from a massive caffeine intake past midnight), began to wonder just how much said child helped in creating it! XD I'm an awful person, I know. u.u I blame constant viewings of 4chan for my corrupted thought processes!
As I said, any rationalized thinking went straight out the window after all that caffeine (goddamn you finals and your wicked ways of keeping me awake in preparation for you! *shakes angry fist*), so I obviously had a bit of trouble imagining your mermen and mermaids at first. Since my only resource for those two creatures laid solely from my past experiences of viewing The Little Mermaid a bajillion (you heard me, a bajillion!) times as a child, I thought they were dual-colored people with the upper and lower torsos being separate, solid colors. It was only after I got through a third of your fic that I suddenly began to realize that they were a somewhat uniform color overall. I have to say that I had some beautiful skin tones being conjured up in my mind. Emily's, in particular, sounds very interesting. Good job there!
Now to the mermaid sex! Did I mention that I loved the sex? No? Well, I did! It was very hot! X3 I loved how you took inhuman behaviors of arousal, such as the flushed bellies and the curling of tails, into the scene. It just adds this whole other element to the act that just makes it that much more appealing!
Personally, I thank reading furry stories in the past for not even making me flinch at some of the things in this fic. I didn't even bat an eye once when I took note of the prehensile penises! I mean, when you've seen furry art of this fictional species of sergals, female ones especially, who have prehensile clitoral hoods (yes, you read that right), are you really gonna react when you read about "bulls" being dominated by their cocks? I mean, I'm so used to reading or seeing these crazy, and sometimes demented, things that I was almost hoping to see Emily or Emma (maybe both) with prehensile clitoral hoods (that's beginning to become a whole lotta fun to type! ^^) really going at it at some point! And I solely blame your Fake Empire fic for that thought! XP
Yay for a Christian cameo! We so rarely see him in your fics, after all. Oo~ And we have a Derek/Spencer pairing too?! ...Is it odd that I can actually see that being plausible? And cute too? << But then I weep because even in a crackfic we see two familiar characters pairing up, and yet we've had nothing of the sort for my Sage! T^T She deserves a bit of happiness, no matter how cracky, don't you think? *hint hint* *nudge nudge*
Oo~ And shame on you for distracting me from my studies with your wonderfully, tantalizing fics when finals are only a week away! ...Pfft! Who am I kidding? I enjoy your fics, whether I'm piled high with essays and projects or not! They're so addictive! I don't think I'll ever get enough of them!