And suddenly, instead of suspecting that she was being played and being made a mockery of on by fate, Emily felt a little like Indiana Jones, or someone, breaking down a prison door.
Yay Emily! That sentence made me smile. I really love how this is developing. Another thing I like is how each Emma is different from the others. The same applies to Emily, but it's not as apparent to me (could be because most of your fics are from her PoV). They're the same core character, but you can tell that the universe they live in has shaped them differently. I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but it really adds something to your fics.
“I’ll be your live-in. No sex, but I can watch your brat.”
I wonder how long this train of thought will last.
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Date: 2009-10-20 07:46 am (UTC)Yay Emily! That sentence made me smile. I really love how this is developing. Another thing I like is how each Emma is different from the others. The same applies to Emily, but it's not as apparent to me (could be because most of your fics are from her PoV). They're the same core character, but you can tell that the universe they live in has shaped them differently. I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but it really adds something to your fics.
“I’ll be your live-in. No sex, but I can watch your brat.”
I wonder how long this train of thought will last.