Okay, so now I'm caught up on this. Yay, they kissed! Albeit awkward and fleeting, but their was a kiss so yay. I like the line about Emma not wanting to be alone in her head. Despite the fact that they are just 'regular' people in this fic you still stay true to their character. Great update!
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Date: 2010-01-07 07:55 pm (UTC)