Date: 2010-05-10 01:46 am (UTC)
Yay! Another awesome update, I love this story :) JJ/Emily used to be my OTP in the 'Criminal Minds' universe, but I have to say that after getting fed up with all the fanfics dealing with Emily/JJ & the Captain Crawfish baby-drama, reading your Emma/Emily stories was a much welcomed breath of fresh air. Your writing has firmly convinced me that Emma is a much better match for Emily on so many levels and has ruined me for Emily/JJ stories ;)

I loved the different perspectives in this section, particularly Emma's POV and I also liked how although Emily is still pretty dense in common-sense related matters, she's finally opening up a bit to Emma and communicating that Emma's important to her. I look forward to seeing how you move their relationship further.

I also loved this line (hehehe):
"Bring your spawn, Prentiss! No more surprises like in December!"

Good luck with your paper!
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