Date: 2010-06-28 06:25 pm (UTC)
Up until the end there, I thought only you and I knew who Miss Hartley was! <3 Still, you did an amazing job of keeping Sage in character, so kudos to you! I was hoping that she'd be a werewolf too, actually, with all her knowledge concerning certain matters of lycanthropy and whatnot. I mean, with her usual, in-control demeanor, you'd think that she'd make an incredible one. Ah, but thanks for including the little Sage/Garcia in one of your earlier chapters and in this one as well! It made me squee with happiness!

We didn't one of the traditional happy ending scenes in the conclusion of this fic, but I'm actually pretty satisfied with the way this all turned out. The usual norms of a relationship are thrown out in place of a more animalistic one, so it's understandable that things aren't always going to go smoothly. Congrats on finishing up another piece. *blinks* I guess this means you have about five prompts left now for the Citrus table, right?

*sighs* Damn, I've been in a slump with my own writing. I've been so down lately. Ah, but still, expect an e-mail from me later tonight. >>;
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