Very hot, though still hard to wrap my ming round Emily/JJ. But the parts with Emma meeting her double was great! So much humor. The plot was good as well, and the smut was excellent.But again, what really made it was the humor - Emma meeting herself, Emma and Emily's first time (very awkward due to circumstances), Emma telling Scott no, and of course, JJ finding out. This line was pure gold: “If you hadn’t I would have never heard her yelping, ‘I thought you were a dyke! You slurped that boy’s cock down and choked on it. He was like fifteen! You didn’t even make him wear a condom!’ And now everyone thinks I’m a straight pedophile who likes risky sex.” The smut was very good, especially in this scene where Emily tops. But what made it really good was the trust Emma placed in her (voluntarily or involuntarily), despite her bad memories, and the fact that she's willing to do it again.
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Date: 2010-12-12 07:19 pm (UTC)The smut was very good, especially in this scene where Emily tops. But what made it really good was the trust Emma placed in her (voluntarily or involuntarily), despite her bad memories, and the fact that she's willing to do it again.