Date: 2011-07-05 10:48 am (UTC)
Wow. After Emily's first line, I expected the world to implode.
A very nice scene. It was indeed, just a family scene together. And not even Emma, Emily and Deirdre, but rather, all kinds of people, simply enjoying themselves together. Interesting to compare Emma to the old uncle. It's hard, because on one hand, she's so inappropriate... and on the other, she insists on good manners and teaches others how to do so. I wonder if JJ will start understanding Emma more thanks to the these times together. That seemed to be the way Emily was trying to get her to go.
'Emily, in the Laundry room... with a Washing Machine'. Isn't that a scary thought? Emma playing her own game of Clue with Emily? The finger thing was hot. And the ending was a very good way to express the current relationship between Emma and Emily, or really, practically any type of relationship with Emma. Hopefully you'll be getting your writing muscles back into working order, and we'll have more soon.
Happy 4th of July.
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