Ooh. I just caught up on the first 3 parts of this, and I'm definitely intrigued! I really like how you made Jill "remember" things about Lindsay. That was very cool.
I haven't quite placed all the characters, though... Claire isn't Claire from WMC, is she? Because the way you've portrayed her, I just can't quite imagine WMC Claire.
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Date: 2009-03-13 04:46 pm (UTC)I haven't quite placed all the characters, though... Claire isn't Claire from WMC, is she? Because the way you've portrayed her, I just can't quite imagine WMC Claire.
Anyway, great job! :)