Animals and Prizes - 1st & 2nd Base!

[nike_ravus]

Title: Animals and Prizes Timestamps (1&2/4?)
Author: Alsike
Fandom: Victorious
Pairing: Jade West/Tori Vega
Rating: NO LONGER PG-13

Summary: Tori Vega is starting an exciting new school, Hollywood Arts, but she has a secret. She's a female alpha, naturally dominant and aggressive.  If anyone finds out, her life will hardly be worth living. In addition, Alphas sense when an omega goes into heat, but that doesn't mean she wants an omega - especially not a girl omega. Biology isn't destiny, right? Jori

Warnings: This is a Knotting world - because knotting is hilarious and kind of gross - so be prepared.  And... maybe a touch of gender politics. 

So, LJ was being a gank, and now there are timestamps.  I have decided that it is against the spirit of the thing to write a knotting fic without knotting.  :)

First Base

Second Base

Comments

[mayireadtoday.livejournal.com]

I hope the police managed to keep it quiet that Jade's mother let Tori in because I'm worried that Hadrian will kill Jade's mother.

So interesting that Jade decided not to have the mating broken.

So awesome: "Well, I had to give them some reason why I had picked you above all of the other alphas, and it's not like they're going to believe that it's because..."

[...] "Because you make me look you in the eye."

Hilarious: "They disapproved of more than one syllable names."

Even though Tori says "I want you to care about me, and I want you to be happy with me. That's all," I'm still hoping for Tori-Jade monogamy.

I really like that you have Tori not ready to "pin Jade's wrists against the wall, bite and suck to leave more marks, hold down her hips and hear her beg." That Tori is still Tori even though she has hormones to deal with.

[karatam.livejournal.com]

I would like you to please narrate the rest of their lives please?

(also, this whole fic is awesome!)

[kith-koby.livejournal.com]

This was awesome. I love how the relationship between them is so cute and adorable sometimes, but also very realistic and hard. It reinforces what I was saying all along, how Jade needs to learn to deal with this life, to know Tori's boundaries while learning to accept Tori is not any other Alpha, and is the one who never control her.

Also: "Tori felt herself stiffen" - you realize what this sounds like?

Lastly, Trina is now a snarkier JJ.

[nike-ravus.livejournal.com]

"Tori felt herself stiffen"
Oh lol, and of course I follow it up with, "She hadn't wilted completely."

[kith-koby.livejournal.com]

Of course, now that we know how female alphas knot, it makes a bit of sense...