Animals and Prizes Timestamp 3

[nike_ravus]

Title: Animals and Prizes Timestamps (3/4)
Author: Alsike
Fandom: Victorious
Pairing: Jade West/Tori Vega
Rating: NO LONGER PG-13!

Summary: Tori Vega is starting an exciting new school, Hollywood Arts, but she has a secret. She's a female alpha, naturally dominant and aggressive.  If anyone finds out, her life will hardly be worth living. In addition, Alphas sense when an omega goes into heat, but that doesn't mean she wants an omega - especially not a girl omega. Biology isn't destiny, right? Jori

Warnings: This is a Knotting world - because knotting is hilarious and kind of gross - so be prepared.  And... maybe a touch of gender politics. 

Soooo, I want to whine about how writing fanfic is a thankless job, but it really isn't.  I just get upset when people hate on my characters.  And I'm tired.  And I'm sick of this installment, so I'm posting it, in the hope that putting it away will make it possible for me to write the next section with some actual events and interaction besides just setting up the 3 specific erotic activities I have planned out.  What still needs to be solved in this universe?  Besides Jade needing to be punched in the face and Tori acting like a 12 year old, because those are just characterization choices and it's too late to fix them now.
(Ignore the grumpiness!  I had an awesome weekend!)

Animals and Prizes at FFN

Comments

[mayireadtoday.livejournal.com]

Yay! We learn about female alpha biology! So how long is Tori's clit when it's engorged? Also, I'm guessing when Tori orgasmed that come was the special baby-making come.

Also, it was hot.

Bah humbug to the haters. I love your Tori and Jade.

[cyberlogical.livejournal.com]

Love it. Please keep up the good work.

[kith-koby.livejournal.com]

This was so much better! Because their relationship has moved on a bit, and it's at the stage that though they still need lots of work, they get each other and don't get angry as much, because there's more understanding. and it was so totally hot, despite being only third base, this would have won sexiest scene. Maybe hand-job in theater is a cliche, but there's a reason it is, and this chapter explains why. Tori and Jade's reactions to each other, both sexual and not were perfect (prostitute jokes! oh, the glory of prostitute jokes!). I am literally giddy with it.

Plus, new best line: "Not distinct from a beta female her ass, but, of course, girls didn't measure"